热点评论:我对琼瑶爱情小说的看法-My View on Qiong Yaos Love Stories

我对琼瑶爱情小说的看法
【内容提示】
在你们学校，几乎每一个同学都看琼瑶的爱情小说，结果有许多同学的表现不如以前好了。于是，学校决定禁止学生看这些书。但是，你和校方的看法不同，觉得应该让同学们看这些书，你认为应该让共青团组织积极引导。你提出三条理由来说明自己的观点。
【作文示范】
My View on Qiong Yao's Love Stories
Qiong Yao's Love stories are read by almost every student in our school. As a result, many students are not doing as well as they used to in their studies. For this reason, the school authority decided to put a ban① on those stories.
I don't think the prohibition② is necessary. To begin with, Qiong Yao is a successful novelist. She has portrayed the characters so well that the readers are always moved. Her stories help us learn more about society. Secondly, after reading the stories, readers tend to compare the experience of the characters with their own to learn a lesson. In this way, they gain more experience about life. That isn't bad, is it? Finally, the language is beautiful. Readers find it an enjoyment to read her stories.
Maybe, the school authority and teachers are afraid that in Qiong Yao's stories there is something unhealthy which may affect the minds of the students. But then we are old enough to deal with it properly. I suggest that the Communist Youth League Branch hold discussions to guide young students along the correct way to growth ideologically③.
（选自1986年12月16日《上海学生英文报》）
【词语解释】
①ban[b$n] n．禁止；禁令
②prohibition[?pr+ui'biM+n; ?pr+uhi'biM+n] n．禁止；禁令
③ideologically[aidi+u'l&dNik+li] ad．在思想上；在意识形态方面
【写法指要】
1．本文作者在引言段中先指出校方“禁读”的观点，然后在扩充段第二段第一句以段落主题句的方式树立了一个与校方相反的论点“不必禁”，接着用三条理由（reasons）证明自己观点的正确：1）小说家塑造的人物惟妙惟肖；2）读者可以从人物的经历中获得生活的经验；3）小说的语言优美，读来是一种享受。这样，作者通过反证自己观点的正确，间接反驳了校方的观点和做法。最后作者在第三段用退一步的方法进一步论证自己观点的正确，并提出了建议。
2．第二段第一句中的“prohibition”与第一段最后一句的“ban”以同义词方式相呼应，第三段第一个词“Maybe”以转折的方式与第二段衔接，这样的连贯方式是十分可取的。

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