好坏对比:有礼貌与没礼貌-Good Manners and Bad Manners

有礼貌与没礼貌
【内容提示】
每个社会都提倡文明礼貌行为而反对不文明没礼貌的举止。有礼貌的人会受到人们的尊重和支持，没礼貌的人会遭到大家的唾弃和反对。请你就这一问题写一篇短文将各自的优劣作一对比。
【作文示范】
Good Manners and Bad Manners
Every society encourages good manners but opposes① bad manners. People with good manners enjoy many supports while those with bad manners suffer a lot.
Everyone likes a person with good manners. A person with good manners will be welcomed everywhere. In public places, such as in shops, a salesman with good manners will probably make a good sale. A teacher will do his or her job smoothly② and happily in the class where the students have good manners. If you ask for a help, you should be careful of your manners. Almost everyone likes to serve the person with good manners.
On the contrary, no one likes a person with bad manners. A person with bad manners will be refused everywhere. We dislike those who spit at random, who speak aloud in the library, and who smoke with a lady aside. They are all bad manners which are impolite to others. Those with bad manners may be considered as lacking in knowledge and self cultivation③. People even do not want to talk with them. There is no doubt that nobody would like to serve or help a man with bad manners.
Then, what should we do in our daily life? We should be careful of what we say and what we do. Good manners mean that you show your respect to others. If you respect others, other people will respect you in the same way. You will have less trouble in your everyday life.
【词语解释】
①oppose[+'p+uz] v．反对；反抗
②smoothly['smu:Jli] ad．顺利地
③self-cultivation['self?kl)ti'veiM+n] n．修养
【写法指要】
本文是对好坏两种行为的对比。文章采用“启、承、转、合”的模式安排题材。第一段引出篇题，第二段写好的一面，第三段用衔接语“on the contrary”与第二段承接，引起坏的一面，第四段是结尾段，作者先提出建议，再给“good manners”下定义，最后指出“有礼貌”的好处。

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